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  1. hmmm… good one Navin.
    Though I wonder if it would be better this way:

    “….We’ll pay for it tonight.

    As the raised humidity makes us sweat.”

    …more symmetry, don’t you think.
    Sorry about remote editing your poem 😉 I defer to your better knowledge as a language grad

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